I've been dreading this day since project cinderella started...Sorry, but most of this blog is just going to be me, brainstorming and trying to figure out what the heck I'm doing, hehe...Oh no...now it's....it's.......it's....time for blog...blog...blog....TWENTY ONE D= D= D=
First line...first line...first line....hmmm....hold on, give me a minute. (10 hours later....) Sorry, still nothing...give me a little bit more time, ok? (12 days later...) NOW I'VE GOT IT! Sorry, it sort of takes a while to think of a first line. You know, I have really given my story as much thought as I had thought. Thanks once again for keeping me on track...now for my first lines:
- Here is the tale of how the small French village of the delightful Mr. Moreau and his lovely daughter, Honeysuckle, has been changed forever due to the magical power of a mysterious dog named Mr. Chien.
I'm also thinking about:
- There once was a man named Mr. Moreau and his daughter Honeysuckle. The two lived happily in a small French village. That is, until they met the strange Mr. Chien from a saddening event that will change the lives of Mr. Moreau and his daughter forever.
In these sentences, we are introduced to the three main characters, the setting of the story, and it sort of makes you wonder what exactly will happen in the story, doesn't it? I'm really liking the first sentence better than the second one...but I think I like the second sentence a little more. I will decide on the sentences tomorrow, seeing as we're gonna start writing the story anyways.
Those first lines will NOT be permanent. I am open to any suggestions, please tell me =D
Ok...picture time. So, for the picture, it will definately have Mr. Moreau and Honeysuckle in it. The only thing is...what else will be in the picture? Hmm...I think perhaps that the two can be smilling together, or something. Bare with me, I'm brainstorming =D Now...I KNOW!!! The picture will depict Mr. Moreau and his daughter sitting on a rock in the forest next to their village, as is it where the two spend most of their time. The two will be smilling, and the village will be in the background =D Don't worry, I've drawn things way harder than this =)
Once again, I'm open to suggestions! Please help me, I'm sad ='(
That's all I've got, folks. Come back tomorrow for another edition of project cinderella!
Have a nice day =D
I'm enjoying the whole thought process... I think personally it's always easy to help someone else write their lines, without being able to help yourself first. I'm not really sure if I can help you like online, but I could definitely help you in third hour if you're still stuck :) I actually like writing sometimes... I think you're off to a good start though; just keep thinking! I also like the picture idea. All in all... Good job!
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