Day Twenty-Five

Ok....this seems easy enough. Seriously...I can literally remember posting day one...it's like...so unbelievable that this is almost over D= oh well time to get over it. Here's day twenty five.

Hmmmm...when I reread my story, it seemed to flow a bit. In fact, I'm only going to change a few things. It's probably this way because I'm so used to writing. If you look on my laptop, you will see many poems and stories written by me. Now, now, I'm not a perfect writer (no one is), there are times when I simply dread rereading my work because I think it came out horrible (which it sometimes does). Ok, enough of that.

I didn't know that stories made sounds....I think my sounds like a love bird =D tweet, tweet! Ok, seriously, I think that while raeding my story it sounded a bit...dramatic. Along with dramatic, I think my story has a few places where there could be more information, and there are also areas where there could be less information. This story sounds like something a child would read and enjoy...but I can't say this with confidence since I'm not quite sure what children like nowadays (killing, wars, the internet...things change, ya know?).

The flow...hmmm...my story flowed really well for the most part. Only thing is the beginning. I don't like how I started my story at all. I didn't want to be too informative (explain the main characters, the setting, plot, what happens, etc all in ONE sentence...does that make sense?), nor did I want it to sound boring..but it seems it's on the border of boring. After the first page..pages three to five seem to just kinda hang out there... ...well, it just seems like a page or two is just there to be there since I need 15 pages, does that make sense?

Style....style...style...hmmm...what exactly does this mean? Give me a minute...(a few hours later) ok I'm back. The style of the story is simply one paragraph above my crudely drawn illustrations. The paragraphs themselves are quite quick and to the point. Only thing is, I say one thing on one page, and explain it on another. That's not really a bad thing...it just seems like I'm just trying to take up space for those 15 pages. It's like..."Honeysuckle went to the lake" on one page, and on the next page it's "After going to the lake, she saw a fish." Does that make sense?

I think my real problem is worrying too much about 15 pages. As I've said, the flow was good except for the fact that I was just kind of adding things that didn't need to be there, and it's as if I'm taking up space just for 15 pages. Meh, I'll get over it eventually and stop about it.

This was it for day 25, come back again tomorrow, for the tragic day 26...am I the only who senses that day 26 will be difficult? Oh yea, I need a funny yet annoying ending. Say yes to drugs, drop out of school, eat plenty of fat, and make sure to not do any of the things that I just said! And remember:

Have a nice day =D