Thursday, November 4, 2010

Day Twenty-Four

I can't believe how close we are to ending project cinderella...it's almost as if we just started it yesterday =/ I remember it now...making my first blog, commenting on everyone else's blog...being hated for commenting on everyone's blog...ahhhh...good times good times =D *snaps out of it* ok, let's get serious now. Time for day twenty-four...climaxes...

Let's have a little fun. Let's count how many times I say the word "climax" =D

Ok, so, even though not much happens in a my story, there are many things in my story that could be a climax. *Reads list where climax types are listed* hmmm....I don't really know where any of these climaxes could fit. Oh wait, I know...wait...first, let's list the possible climaxes, shall we? =)
  • Honeysuckle is bitten by a poisonous fish and later becomes ill for three days, close to death. This could be the climax because...well, doesn't it just scream "CLIMAX!!!!!!" and on top of that, it adds up a lot of tension. Since she is close to death and saying she will die, that will add a bit of a "Will she ever be cured??? D=" kind of feelin' don't ya think?
  • Honeysuckle is kidnapped by Mr. Chien. Well, of course this builds up tension. It also teaches my moral perfectly (know it or else). Seeing that she is gone for many years and Mr. Moreau is unable to cook, I think this'll add a "Will she ever be found??? D=" kind of feelin' don't ya think?
List of possible climaxes that my climaxes could be are:
  • Goals achieved or shockingly lost
  • Relationships made or mended
  • Greatest challenges met or failed
It could be the goals achieved one because well...Honeysuckle was sick and she finally got better. Also, Mr. Moreau finally gets his daughter back after she returns to him. And Mr. Chien gets himself a nice bride...nice climax, huh? As for "Greatest challenges met or failed" well....actually it's sort of the same as "Goals achieved"... Honeysuckle is sick, gets cured, then gets kidnapped, then returns, etc. Uh huh it's definately the same, don't ya think? =/ It could be "Relationships made or mended" mainly because Honeysuckle and Mr. Chien get married...well, that's not a very good climax...Oh well enough with zee climaxes, let's focus on other things!

...What to focus on...what to focus on....hmmm....well, I guess the main climax in my story could be when Honeysuckle (why do I always mention this name 500 times in a blog???) gets kidnapped, cause that's really where all the drama starts. Wait, no it's not...Honeysuckle getting sick is where the drama starts! Yea...that could be my climax! Mhm Honeysuckle getting sick is definately...well...I DON'T KNOW, OK? D=< I have to really think about this...

Climax word count: 14...hmmm not bad

In the meantime, stay in school, don't do drugs, stay away from alchohol, put out all forest fires, recycle, donate to the poor, stranger danger, and remember....wait...what is it again? I forgot...hehe...remember what I just forgot! =P But most importantly...

Have a nice day =D

1 comment:

  1. I love the blog.. It's detailed. I liked how you included the climax word count, and it was very creative; kind of funny! Anyways as usual... Good job. I enjoyed reading this, and I can't believe that Project Cinderella is almost over. It kind of makes me sad :/ I like the climaxes you chose, but I like the first one. Good job....

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