So....time for another blog. This time, the events of my story in chronological order...great...
Ok, first off...My story does not take place in a day, in a week, not even in a year. Rather, it happens for many years. I have the timeline of the story completely laid out, the only thing is turning them into this blog, which I can easily do.
So, at first, my story is broken up into days. On the first day, this happens, then three days after that, this happens, then three days after that, this happens. After those days are complete, the timeline turns into years, as one of the main character spends many years looking for his daughter. Without further adieu, I bring you...day fourteen!!!
Well, let's start from the beginning, shall we? I'm not really sure whether or not the introduction to the story should have a timeline or not, since I'm just introducing you to the characters and their personalities. So, no official timeline will be written. Sorry =/
In the introduction:
- We are introduced to Mr. Moreau and his lovely daughter, Honeysuckle
RIGHT after that
- You learn about the curious mind of Honeysuckle. You learn that she enjoys flying kites, wonders why the kites fly, and how the kites fly, etc.
Right after that
- You will learn of what happened to the wife of Mr. Moreau
Now, time to do the ACTUAL assignment, which is to list the EVENTS!!! Well, there aren't many events in my story at all. So, this part shouldn't be hard at all.
On the first day of the story:
- Honeysuckle gets a mysterious sickness
- Mr. Moreau tries to find out what the illness is, and how to cure it. He asks for help from any man willing to cure his daughter, and promises to make them her groom.
On the second/third day of Honeysuckle's disease:
- Many men from far and wide come to try and cure Honeysuckle in hopes of becoming her groom. Unfortunately, they all fail miserably (strange that this happened over two days, isn't it?).
On the fourth day of Honeysuckle's disease:
- Honeysuckle (who is pale and very sickly), cries and believes she will die. She bids her father, and her life, farewell. Moreau is in tears, along with his daughter as the two hold each other's hands.
- Mr. Moreau meets Mr. Chien, a giant dog-like beast who claims to have the cure for Honeysuckle's illness.
- Honeysuckle is cured by Mr. Chien after drinking a magical potion that he gives her.
Three days later...
- Honeysuckle is kidnapped by Mr. Chien, after he snatches the young girl into his large mouth and trots off into the forest.
- Moreau and others try their best to find Honeysuckle, but to no avail. Eventually, the men stop looking, but Moreau keeps on looking, hoping that she will return.
During those many years that Honeysuckle is missing (this probably doesn't even count, but I'll write it anyways):
- Moreau stays hopeful that she will return, and keeps the kites they used to fly together (The flags are the national colors of France) as memory of her. He spends his days, lonely, waiting for his daughter.
Many years later (Moreau is an old man by now):
- Honeysuckle returns to Moreau, and Chien explains that he a magical beast who had taken Moreau's daughter as a bride to live in his utopia-like world, inside his angelic castle.
- Chien and Honeysuckle introdue Moreau to their three children, named Amore (love), Espoir (hope) and Faith. Moreau hugs the three children, and the family lives happily together, in Chien's utopia.
End of timeline.
My story will happen in the exact order that I wrote it in. With this timeline, I'm sure that the story will turn out great.
Have a nice day =D
I love the organization of the blog... Again very detailed. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThis is so detailed. I can see the story in my head as I read this blog! I have to admit I was a little saddened that he just met his daughter and she was dying. But I can tell this is going to be wonderful, and have a nice message for the kiddies :)
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